Nat- don't confuse representation and audience- make sure how you have PORTRAYED a particular group of people in the mag- how do they come across through things such as language and costume.
The technologies part needs developing- you have used more than the ones you state and don't just comment on the technical things you've learnt but also how using technoligies helped you with lots of other skills.
The prelim bit is a little bit brief- again, what skills have you learnt and think about the whole process of learning.
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